Broken Heart Poem by lil island Gal

Broken Heart

Rating: 4.3


Kabhi Nazrein milane zamaane beet jate hain
Kabhi nazrein churane mein zamaane beet jate hain
Kissi ne ankh b kholi, to sone ki nagri mein
Kissi ko ghar banana mein zamane beet jate hain
Kabhi kali–syah raaten hamein ik pal ki lagti hain.
Kabhi ik pal bitane mein zamaane beet jate hain
Kabhi khola darwaza, khari thi samne manzil
Kabhi manzil ko pane mein zamaane beet jate hain
Ik pal mein toot jate hain umar bhar k wo rishte
Wo rishte jin ko banana mein zamaane beet jate hain….

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Hum who phool hain jo roz roz nai khiltay
Woh hont hain jo kabhi nai siltay,
Hum say bichroo ge to ehsaas hoga tumhe,
Hum ho raste hain jo roz roz nahi miltay,

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Suna hai dil se dil ki duri nahi hoti,
Kash koi majburi, majburi na hoti,
Unko dekhne ki tamanna hai her waqt lakin,
Kehte hain her tamanna puri nai hoti…..





P.S: An abstract...

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Sarwar Chowdhury 22 November 2008

'Dil sey dil ki duri nehi hoti'.........oh nice! 'her tamanna puri nehi hoti'........true bahut achhaha likha! 10++++

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C T Heart 25 November 2008

I dont understand your language though with the title itself i know to whom you are referring to..one of the few...

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Anjali Sinha 27 November 2008

Wo rishte jin ko banana mein zamaane beet jate hain….(true--) Kehte hain her tamanna puri nai hoti…..(absolutely true--so dont anticipate much)

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Sadiqullah Khan 01 December 2008

Umr-e-javed ki dua kerte Faiz itne wo kab humarey thay, , a 10 from me

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Jitz ***** 13 December 2008

it was a really super write.... you are gifted..! !

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Reetessh Sabrr 08 December 2008

ye ada humne sochi na thi, gazalkwani yu dekhi na thi.

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Waqas Naeem 05 December 2008

waah! ala! ...ghazal mein behtari ki gunjaaish hai laikin majmooi taur per buhut zabardast kaavish hai...

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C. P. Sharma 04 December 2008

sweet lil gal, bahuT khooB haiN aur bhee duniya meiN suKHanwar bohot achche kehte haiN ki 'GHalib' ka hai andaaz-e-bayaaN aur wahi andaaz tujh meiN hai

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! ~ RAJNISH JENA ~! 03 December 2008

kya baat hai...wah wah...wah actually great words dear.......nice one.....keep writing

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