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Broken Dreams

Rating: 4.9
Oh, if I had a star to shine
For every broken dream of mine
The whole night sky would turn to day
And all my troubles melt away....



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I love you more than life itself
But Im afraid to love.
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Muhammad Ali 01 May 2009
A poem with focussed mind :) A sweet first stanza........ dreamy atmosphere of sadness. 'You'll love me for a little while Then you'll set me free again' it seems you believed in the opinion that in love... no freedom! and again there is a heart felt piece.... 'You've got my heart held on a string. Its breaking right in two. Enough belongs to me -to hurt- The rest belongs to you' ..... and its end is also very nice, though it is a poem of sorrow but i feel it something very sweet! just TOUCHY! !
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Carl Harris 22 April 2009
This is a very well written poem, lil Gal, and I liked how consistent your rhyming in it was. You certainly have a talent for poetic expression and displayed it quite well in this charming poem. Carl.
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Samreena Lodhi 06 January 2009
gud poem.............. i like this poem........ bht achi likhi hai....
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Sameer Ahmed 01 January 2009
Hope always stays alive.............Be optimistic
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Sebastine Humaemo 30 December 2008
a poem with passionate feelings of love.........sebastine
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Nia Riz 25 December 2008
this is a beautiful poem! ...the ways you have described this love you have is sooooo well penned! ...a perfectionnist! ...keep wrting such beautiful pieces more...i would love to see them.. merry Xmas and a happy new year! NIA RIZ
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Sathyanarayana M V S 24 December 2008
you have well defined a women in love. Tender feelings, some hesitation, shyness, , all together in a very beautiful poem.
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Reshma Ramesh 24 December 2008
broken dreams...........nice sad love poem......well penned.......
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Reetessh Sabrr 23 December 2008
The person who's ur inspiration can be felt forever, be they with u or not. Its a challange which a few stand to accept and prove. Your poem tells about the seed in you. Now this lil girl has to grow into a full bloomed tree. You have a long way to go Superb writing.
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nicely written with extreme passion... i'm sorry for wat ur goin thorugh... wats meant to be will happen. don't lose faith. xoxo~paris~xoxo
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