Monday, October 23, 2017

Thoughts Comments

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My thoughts are like leafs
Making swishing sound
When mind observes angles
In the road of my journey;
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Anil Kumar Panda
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Sase Vardhni 23 October 2017

An amazing presentation of thoughts that is presented with a combination of simile and metaphor :)

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Anil Kumar Panda 24 October 2017

Thanks Sase. I am glad you liked it. Thanks for positive comment.

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Kumarmani Mahakul 23 October 2017

It is beautiful poem on thoughts in a metaphorical way having nice depiction. Thoughts are like leaves which make swishing sounds. Nice presentation. Thanks.

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Anil Kumar Panda 23 October 2017

I am glad for such inspiring comment Sir. Thank you very much.

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