Thoughts Poem by Anil Kumar Panda

Thoughts



My thoughts are like leafs
Making swishing sound
When mind observes angles
In the road of my journey;

They die, get washed away
In the rain of daily chores
And get rebirths with a new
Season of maturity and events

With spring of success they
Spring up from hibernation
And send the aroma of love
In paper boats to thousand souls

Monday, October 23, 2017
Topic(s) of this poem: thoughts
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Sase Vardhni 23 October 2017

An amazing presentation of thoughts that is presented with a combination of simile and metaphor :)

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Anil Kumar Panda 24 October 2017

Thanks Sase. I am glad you liked it. Thanks for positive comment.

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Kumarmani Mahakul 23 October 2017

It is beautiful poem on thoughts in a metaphorical way having nice depiction. Thoughts are like leaves which make swishing sounds. Nice presentation. Thanks.

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Anil Kumar Panda 23 October 2017

I am glad for such inspiring comment Sir. Thank you very much.

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