'Thoughts' Poem by David Cleveland

'Thoughts'

Rating: 4.3

This man walked up and put a gun to my head.
He said do as I say, or you will be dead.
So I started thinking, if I had one more goodbye.
I would say these things before I die.
I love you mom, I wish I had said it more.
Dad, I'm sorry I left your tools on the floor.
And to my little brother, who was always a pain.
It hurts knowing I'll never see you again.
And to my unborn child, that I never had.
I'm sorry I won't have a chance to be your dad.
And to my Lord, who I love and praise.
I'm ready my Father if today's the day.

Monday, March 24, 2025
Topic(s) of this poem: brother,dad,goodbye,mom,sorry
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Rebecca Navarre 30 July 2025

An ever so reflective poem! .. Endless 10'S And Stars! ..++++++++++++++++++++++++

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Rebecca Navarre 30 July 2025

Deeply heart moving and ever so touching! ..

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Kim Barney 30 July 2025

Someone has voted this poem a 2. It is worth so much more than that! I gave it five. Very good sentiments. Tell your loved ones often that you love them.

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