Saturday, July 6, 2019

Thoughts In Time And Out Of Season Comments

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As I drive slowly past the school,
I hear children's laughter floating,
Upon gentle summer breezes.
Then I pass the cemetery gates:
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Michael Hopkins 08 July 2019

That too will pass. A very insightful and thoughtful poem, Dominic.

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Dominic Windram 08 July 2019

Thanks Michael...I was attempting a kind of stream of consciousness approach to this poem...all things must pass I guess!

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Jazib Kamalvi 07 July 2019

A refined poetic imagination, Dominic Windram. You may like to read my poem, Love And Iust. Thank you.

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Dominic Windram 07 July 2019

Thanks Jazib...I'll definitely read the poem you mention and comment. Have a nice day!

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