Thursday, March 4, 2010

Thoughts Of A Kamikaze Comments

Rating: 4.5

when imperial court asked me
raised both hands
did not want to die a coward
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Doug Ordunio
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Elena Sandu 06 April 2010

Thank you for sharing! .. happy to have the chance to read such an interesting poem!

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Full of feeling and packed with passion. Thanks for sharing my friend.

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Bill Cushing 04 March 2010

Love the imagery and internal monologue that captures the fear and the pride of such a task. I'd like to see the work punctuated with either better line breaks or actual punctuation. Still, this piece is meant to be savored.

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