Thread Poem by Gustav Zielinski

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Rating: 5.0


It's 12 o' clock.
That's quite a shock.
I hear the pret-
ty doorknob knock.

It's almost 3.
It hurts! My knee!
Never ever!
Very clever!

No! It's past 5.
Hear him stepping,
jolly with knife,
singing clapping.

It's 12 again.
Okay, alright.
I've found the rhyme.
It's about time.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Kesav Venkat Easwaran 20 April 2023

Interesting. Find more time. And richer rhyme

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Oh! Finally you've found the rhyme. And rhyme makes good poetry. The problem is in order to find good rhymes, you need to have good command on your vocabulary. I don't! Top score….

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