deafening night
grandfather's clock
strike at 12 tick tock
prosthetic valve
ticking inside
round the clock
when stop the end..
Ohh i never seen this mechanical valve though i know about it...now i know how it looks like...thank you :) I like your poem too...i think its sounds great and with great sense behind it, liked it :) keep it up Ging
You are a bionic, a strong woman that you are now supposed to be! :)
thank you for dropping by..yes that's how it looks like mechanical valve is inside my heart. :)
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
Nice poem and an unusual subject.
Thank you Christopher :)