patrick o'shaughnessy

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Ticking Time Bomb - Poem by patrick o'shaughnessy

save me from my suicide
take my pain away
at least try to help me
try to make my day

like an explosive ticking time bomb
waiting for the day i die
to leave this world behind
to say my final goodbyes

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Poem Submitted: Wednesday, May 5, 2010

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