Do you know how I just felt
A notch in your belt
A name on your list
To Hell with it all, now I’m just pissed
Damn all these voices
Running through my head
They won’t cease and desist
Until my egos been fed.
You could make them all stop
If you would just ring me today
Why do you avoid me
And keep running away
My bitter cold heart
You’ve opened once more
Filleted with a knife
Pouring onto the floor
I look down on myself
From eyes up above
Something has changed
What’s wrong with this love
My face is all wet
Just like before
When will God help
Me even the score
Why should I try
For that matter, care
Life’s just a ride
Like the one at the fair
1/30/06
I love the title and its metaphor for your relationship with this person. However, emotional pain caused by a lover is probably the number one subject of poems here, so I think I would have tried to make the poem even more original and clever. Regards.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
Good choice of phrasing. I like the way you can pull me into this poem because I have felt like this before and at times still do. Any way, good job. Always & 4ever, Grace