Time Poem by Donald Powell

Time

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It's a common fact we all seem to know
Time is needed to make everything grow

Without time, what do we have?
A whole lot of nothing, it's pretty sad...

Some examples I can give to you;
take a look outside at the wonderful view.

In the distance you see a tree
believe it or not, it was once a seed.

Though seeds are small they are filled with life
with the help of time; to the sky they strife.

without time, what do we have?
A treeless world, it's pretty sad...

Look over there, a loving couple you see
without time, they would not be.

When they started, they were just friends
With time spent together, their life soon begins

Without time, what will they have?
They wont have each other, it's pretty sad...

Many want to grow, the goals not just mine
But growth wont come unless you have the time.

So don't hold back cause time will not wait.
If it's to long, it may be to late.

Because without time, what do we have?
A whole lot of nothing, it's pretty sad...

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Donald Powell 05 January 2013

Thank you for your comments. I was pushed to get back into writing after 10 years. Thus being said, I am a bit rusty, but I will get back into my writing. :)

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Katherine Hunter 05 January 2013

Some spelling and punctuation errors, but very sweet.

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Maria C. Pires Costa 05 January 2013

Keep up taking your time writing further poems! You will be amazed at so much joy, happiness, flowing from your mind and heart. It will never betoo late! Good luck!

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Maria C. Pires Costa 05 January 2013

Keep up taking your time writing further poems! You will be amazed at so much joy, happiness, flowing from your mind and heart. It will never betoo late! Good luck!

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Maria C. Pires Costa 05 January 2013

Keep up taking your time writing further poems! You will be amazed at so much joy, happiness, flowing from your mind and heart. It will never betoo late! Good luck!

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