Sunday, February 6, 2011

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My time, you are an oncoming train!
Awakened by your lingering stay
My time, you are an approaching plane!
Grant me life but one more day.
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Cody Allan Turner
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Mohammad Akmal Nazir 07 February 2011

Wonderfully expressed. Time is the greatest friend as well as the greatest foe of human being. It never stops for anyone whether it is an emperor or a beggar. We can't store time. So we must take time by forelock. Your poem is good in imagery and style. Though simple yet deep. A poignant write indeed.

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