Time Out (Simile, Metaphor, Alleteration Poem) Poem by jana ghossein

Time Out (Simile, Metaphor, Alleteration Poem)

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Help how much my heart hurts
my mouth is as dry as a desert
my throught is sore
my voice is a goner
my heart is beating as fast as a tiger
my hand is a rattling snake
my face is a tomato
bye bye, boring life
i cannot take it no more
i lay my head
upon my knee
now blow the whistle refree

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Adi Cox 02 April 2011

I like this poem. I am trying to put all the imagary in the peom together and I am getting a football match between animals in the desert using a tomato as a football. Are you the personification of this?

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Ririn Andini 10 November 2021

Thank you for writing this poem

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Bob Ross 03 November 2019

Happy Trees, Happy Thoughts, Har, Har, Har

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Bob Ross 03 November 2019

Happy Trees, Happy Thoughts

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The criminal boys 07 May 2019

Im robbing a bank oh wait the popo are here oh no??

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Skyler 02 December 2018

what year did this poem come out

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Oooop 07 May 2019

Glob dober Pooo

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Crim boys 07 May 2019

Noooo not the popo i hate th policeee?????????

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Crim boys 07 May 2019

Noooo not the popo i hate th policeee?????????

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Wooop wooop wwoooooop wooop the popo are here, ! Wooop woop??????????????nooooo

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