Wednesday, July 15, 2020

Time Slowly... (July 12th,2020) Comments

Rating: 5.0

Time slowly pours out its moments,
As I absorb the colour of birdsong:
Fragments of blue skyand deep silence;
Trees primed for Eden's return;
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Shaun Cronick 15 July 2020

Excellent and so beautifully imagined and sublimely delivered Dominic. There's great harmony and utter solace woven in.10++ and added to my favs. Thank you for writing this splendid poem and take care. good sir.

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Mahtab Bangalee 15 July 2020

time is eternal marathon runner............does not know how to stop.......

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