Sunday, March 9, 2008

Time To Fly. Comments

Rating: 4.5

i've tried so hard,
to go and find,
a place to talk,
not run and hide.
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sarah baron
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Vaughn Bekker 20 May 2010

spread your wings, fly from your black hole of depresion, let the sun shine on your beautiful feathers, be free from your chains, we all have been through it at some point, sometimes we just need to stop and look out, there is a beautiful world out there waiting for you, nice write: 0)

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Greenwolfe 1962 11 March 2008

Sarah.....I have had depression all my life. I see the world in black and white. The glass is always half empty. But I am still alive. I have lived long enough for God to give me the 'gift' of poetry. I'm glad I waited to see my dream come true. Whatever your dream, God will hear you. Greenwolfe 1962

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Brennan Scotland 09 March 2008

I admire your strength. Wish I could do the same. You have an indominatable soul that shines in your writing! Keep it up!

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