Thursday, June 23, 2011

Time Will Tell Comments

Rating: 5.0

When will one be happy or sad?
When will all ease sorrows and be glad?
When will all lost darkness then see the light?
And forget the pain one has in the heart?
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Antero K. Caña Jr.
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Mohammad Akmal Nazir 23 June 2011

Fantastic poem. Composed well with vivid imagery. Nice sentiments. Keep it up. I rated it 10. Thanks for sharing..... Kindly read and rate my poem 'A humble complaint' on page 2. Akmal

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