Friday, October 7, 2011

Tinged With Oil Comments

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sunlight dancing
on a puddle of rainwater
tinged with oil....
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Eric Cockrell
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Stefanie Fontker 07 October 2011

I really like this one. You paint a picture here, so clearly do I see it. Lovely writing.

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Dave Walker 07 October 2011

Like it. Really like the last few lines. May i invite you to read my new poem called, powers that be.

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