Thursday, September 26, 2013

Tiny Robot Comments

Rating: 5.0

Tiny Robot Torygop Corp made
Programmed to perception of same,
No labor of effort to progress
Can resist your function to regress.
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Danny Draper
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Bri Edwards 19 October 2013

i had a feeling somewhere along the line that it might have had to do with something other than a toy robot. hopefully my uncertainty can be blamed on my being secluded in california, away from the down under political scene......though i did read something about male versus female politics over there. i did enjoy the rhyming lines more than the non-rhyming lines so thanks for those! i believe you made an error which i have also made. So haves with impunity breath again. i believe an e ending is called for in second-to-the-last word. anyway, thanks for sharing. :)

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