Friday, July 14, 2017

To A Plane Tree Comments

Rating: 5.0

Shadow my soul
With your delicate fronds,
O tree so tall
Outreaching the bonds
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Tom Billsborough
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Susan Williams 08 August 2017

Shadow my soul In this glade of pure silence wherein your essence Nourishes my soil. - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - -That is the best lines I have read this month. Isn't it a wonderful feeling to accomplish perfect lines? I have come close with a phrase or two but never so many lines in a row. You made my heart and soul listen intently throughout this piece and then you wrap it up with silvery bows and a rainbow or two! ! ! Into my fav rack! ! ! 10++++++++++++++++++++

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Tom Billsborough 10 August 2017

With having a South facing back garden we have several trees and bushes for shade, though sadly no plane tree. The nearest equivalent is a tall, stately Ash tree. Trees are aspirational and when the blackbirds are in full song quite musical too! Thanks for your comments, Susan.

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