To Be First! Comments

I thought it was okay at first, and then I read the last few lines. It's cute and, indeed, it can mirror most humankind, at least at one point or another. But, hopefully most of us have grown past the point of such selfishness, or at least past the point of whining so frivolously about it.

I think this poem really describes most of us more than we can ever acknowledge because we are really our own most important person whether we like to admit it or not.