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'To Be Young Is Too Dangerous'

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The most perilous stage of life
Having many dreams, thoughts & seeks
And many destroyer for them
Love, lust, strength and zeal as
Life boat may be shaken in the mid
They change the way of life fully
Rising youth, like a floating leaf iN a stream
That may flow towards unexpected way
It is free like rushty wind
Like blue Mediterranean it is untamed

It is open as great as Pacific ocean
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Thursday, August 25, 2016
Topic(s) of this poem: youth day
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Kelly Kurt 26 August 2016

~Any age can seem trying, as they each have their own problems. Being young means little experience and a lack of understanding by elders (who used to be young themselves) A few grammatical errors but I assume English is a second language. Keep on writing and learning, Pavan Peace

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Pawan Meena 27 August 2016

Hi sir And u were right that English is my second language so its a bit difficult to write poems in English but i like English so I'll try to do my best. I m very obliged for your comments and advises.i

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Pawan Meena 27 August 2016

Thankx sir And u were right that English is my second language so its a bit difficult to write poems in English but i like English so I'll try to do my best. I m very obliged for your comments and advises.

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Kelly Kurt 26 August 2016

Any age can seem trying, as they each have their own problems. Being young means little experience and a lack of understanding by elders (who used to be young themselves) A few grammatical errors but I assume English is a second language. Keep on writing and learning, Pavan Peace

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Edward Kofi Louis 25 August 2016

Perilous stage! ! Nice work.

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