To Close Poem by Mary Wismer

To Close

Rating: 4.8


To Close

You were so close
You saw the lies
what you see in my eyes
and you knew
to little are the truth.

You were so close
you heard my heart
you wanted to be part
Of every beat and
Sharing heated.

You were so close
you felt my skin
Way too thin
and one single touched
had been too much.

You were so close
you left me bare
Just cold air
and memory's haze
filling your place.

10 January 2008

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Dr.subhendu Kar 17 January 2008

love when seems to befuddled and love yet not lost even if shadowed by cloud as it is ephemeral for a moment, excellent write, thanks for sharing

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CU2urDream Lost 14 January 2008

aww thats really to close-...well done

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PERSIAN NIGHTINGALE 11 January 2008

story of broken heart, thanks for sharing

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Patrice James 10 January 2008

you just say that cause you hate me...indeed but i wont change my mine...what ever you try to make me disapoint on you...i will never ever hate you...

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