Sunday, March 29, 2009

To Forgive The One That Never Needed To Be Forgiven (Abuse) Comments

Rating: 4.8

She was cute and little
Loved to laugh and giggle
Alway's trying to make other's smile
Every once in a while
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The silent one
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Probir Gupta 28 May 2017

Indeed very touching poem... deep... very well written...

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Emily Martinez 23 April 2009

I'm sorry. i cry every time

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Shelby Jasmin Estrada 08 April 2009

The silent one, this happens to everyone, everyone wants to let this feeling of being alone and having nothing to do about it, but writing it does help. Aren't you glad that you have the power to write the way you feel? Unlike the poeple who are like the hurter in your story, who does not know how to express their feelings, except by hurting other people, because they feel pain inside... This was a very touching poem, thank you for writing it.

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James Mclain 30 March 2009

I go dead inside....hurray for the good guy who no longer needs to nor has to hide...iip

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Chantel Weston 29 March 2009

so sad..but yet it still happens to so many...

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Meggie Gultiano 29 March 2009

a very touching piece.Well penned

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Karina The Cat 29 March 2009

I like this poem. it touched me.

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