Monday, December 20, 2010

To Juan Olivarez, A Distant Sunrise Comments

Rating: 5.0

I stand welcoming the rising sun
IOn the Myakka Prairie where morning's just begun.
The landscape's flat for miles around,
Silence, for it's miles to the nearest town.
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Sidi Mahtrow
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Smoky Hoss 19 March 2011

A delightful poem, filled with the wonder of words and the depth of nature. Very good.

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Juan Olivarez 20 December 2010

Wow, what beautiful discriptive words Sidi. I feel as if I am there in Sarasota right now. I think it is a beautiful poem, thank you so much. As soon as the site allows me I will rate it a well deserved ten.

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