To Live Poem by Jan Jelenc

To Live

Rating: 5.0


Ache and break
the pain and stain
joy and lust
I long for all of the above

Like the ocean life comes in waves
for us to feel life it comes with pain
I for one can't wait for pain can't wait for life


Shall it be that I would be hit by it all
have my uprise and my fall
gladly I will take it all

Thursday, November 27, 2014
Topic(s) of this poem: existence
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Vajkard Osvald 24 August 2015

Thank you:)

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Roseann Shawiak 23 August 2015

Great poem, love the imagery, how it enfolds humanity and the ocean with comparison! Deftly inspiring! Love it! Thank you for sharing, RoseAnn

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Michael Walkerjohn 27 November 2014

Aloha Blaz Z... Really cool Nom... and most excellent prose... this nose knows its prose... I like this! Thank you for your seemingly effortless wordwork.. All of the best from this life, to you, and all of your relations... Michaelw1two.

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