To Live On Poem by Heather Owens

To Live On

Rating: 5.0


Drain it raw
let the blood pool
the skin re-stitches
the veins close up
The wound aches
the scar awakens
the memory stays
the thoughts haunt
the mind reminisces
of the pain once sought

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Romeo Della Valle 20 September 2009

Heather, this is a short but thoughtful and well-penned, keep it up, you are in the right track, hoping you have time to read my newly posted poem titled 'FEELING BLUE', please, let me know if you like, and rate it, Love and Peace, Romeo

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