Gone away out of my world
This star once shown so bright
Flickering now will it fade way
Only time knows for alone we sit
Why has it left such sorrow
Alas it has taken a will to fight
Darker now comes each day
Alone the end does slither so close
Creeping near on pain it feeds
On knee I beg a chest now tight
Shall life prevail one can pray
A tattered thread my only hope
Is it not 'This star once shone so bright'. A very good expression of disappointment. Such release from emotion gives chance to start fresh. Nice poem.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
to think of losing her is so painful isnt it? ! you express emotion so well... i really enjoyed reading all of ur poems. especially because ive finally come across something that i can relate to. :) thanks