I don't want to be the one who shies away
and loves you less
I don't want to be the one asleep
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Superlatively beautiful. This one i think can be made into a successful song. If a catchy chorus can be done
Let me love you today Let me love you tomorrow Never ever cause you sorrow I love you, this i wanna say Something like that slotted after the first two lines and the end. Great poem