To Y.P.L Poem by DM W

To Y.P.L

Rating: 5.0


O you're young. You should be energised; excited!
But now you are only going through the motions.
I suppose times have changed. But it has come to a head
When those like you are misled by obscure notions,
Rather than be enlightened by gold - tinged beauty,
That flow through the world's veins; endlessly inviting.
You don't seem to perceive the forest for the trees,
So to speak. You are incredibly frustrating!
You would rather pick at the bones of the carcass,
Than reach for the moon and stars amidst this darkness.

Sunday, November 8, 2020
Topic(s) of this poem: satirical
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Shaun Cronick 08 November 2020

Dominic I'm usually pretty good at reading between the lines but Y.P.L has me stumped. Is it short for you people? Anyway, moving on, a more than well written poem of satire and as you state the times have changed indeed and I guess the message is never lose sight of who you are, to be humble and grateful for who you can are and then become become and what you have already in life. A force of and for good. Five stars and take care my friend.

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