To You...My Love Poem by Anand Kumar

To You...My Love

Rating: 5.0


When I closed my eyes..and wanted to see...
My eyes could see you...
When I tied myself....and wanted to walk...
My legs walked towards you...

When I wanted to speak to myself..
My lips could utter only your name...
When I wanted to stay still...
It was my desire for you which made me fly...

Like a small little dropp of rain you came...
And you swept me like an Ocean..
Like a nameless bird...you came flying towards me..
And flying was my heart along with you...

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Ency Bearis 18 July 2009

a nice simile...and splendid write.....well done....10

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Ted M 18 July 2009

The love towards that special person is so beautifully potrayed. You make it sound so beautiful.10+++

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