Thursday, February 16, 2006

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Today I looked across the ground.
Silence fell amongst winter sounds.
Clouds began shouting a sturn song.
Could it be I've looked for too long.
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Gulliver Gimble
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Shannon Chapel 17 February 2006

Nicely done, and reads quite well. I can totally picture the scene. Nice work. Shannon xoxo

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