Told Him Today Poem by jess jayne

Told Him Today



I told him today
It took his breath away
To find out that
I love him
In every single way

He gave me the silent treatment
For saying that I love you

I told him today
it was the best thing i've ever done
I loved him all my life
and i new it was to be.

But he has different plans
and thay were not with me.

Thursday, August 13, 2009
Topic(s) of this poem: today
COMMENTS OF THE POEM

simple words, nice flow, heart breaks do happen, life must go on.

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Shirley Woods 13 August 2009

Jess, It's lovely, simple, sweet but so sad at the same time. I hope you aren't hurt that badly. Best wishes

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