Tomorrow Ain't Promised Poem by Peter parker

Tomorrow Ain't Promised

Rating: 5.0


Chaos in the heart,
When it meet the other.
Easy flow of communication,
When there is connectivity.
Craving in anytime,
when there is a glance of you.
Though we ain't promised tomorrow
The feeling I have for you
Notes me precautions
Look into the mirror,
Cos she stares at you
As spartans were born to fight
Stars were created to give light
Filling in my spaces
Creating vacuum of Love
I was born to love and cherish you
I will repeat this as much as I can
Cos tomorrow ain't promised

POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
Love never dies
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Chinedu Dike 12 August 2022

Beautiful love poem, well articulated and nicely crafted from the heart

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3) The poet discerns that "Tomorrow isn't promised", and so would repeat his vows of love "as much as I can"… nice. Emotionally charged, and highly expressive. Top score from me and onto Myfavourites. Keep it up, dear poet.

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2) …/I was born to love and cherish you" most ardent, passionate and poetic expression of love.

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Beautiful poem of love. "… stars were created to give light/…..

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