Otieno Albert

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Too Far......Still Missing You... - Poem by Otieno Albert

Every morning I wake up

Realizing you're really far away

So I put together my 2 hands

And pray for a good day.



I know God's watching

And he'll lead me back to you

I just have to keep living

So she can see me through.



Although you're not close

And many miles away

I'll still love you

Even after today.



I really miss you dearly

And really wish I was there

But despite of not having you here

At least I still have air.


Comments about Too Far......Still Missing You... by Otieno Albert

  • Umaprosad Das (12/24/2011 10:57:00 PM)


    Dear Otieno Albert,
    You are far away from your sweet-heart,
    And what sad-feelings you now do suffer,
    You have depicted it in a nice manner.
    It is well done, a grand composition,
    I offer my heartiest appreciation.
    Only I'm a bit confused to go through,
    The line 'So she can see me through'
    Whom have you mentioned as 'she'?
    When you addressed by 'you' i.e. thee.
    Is it requires a change?
    Or myself is in mistaken?
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Poem Submitted: Tuesday, December 13, 2011



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