Too Far......Still Missing You... Comments

Dear Otieno Albert, You are far away from your sweet-heart, And what sad-feelings you now do suffer, You have depicted it in a nice manner. It is well done, a grand composition, I offer my heartiest appreciation. Only I'm a bit confused to go through, The line 'So she can see me through' Whom have you mentioned as 'she'? When you addressed by 'you' i.e. thee. Is it requires a change? Or myself is in mistaken?