Too Much Poem by Desserray Whitcomb
Too Much
Too much pain
Too much sadness
It hurts to breathe
My heart is broken
It can't be fixed
So much disappointment
So many lies
Its hard to trust anyone
Too many tears
Theres no end
So much darkness
Can't find the light
Look in the mirror
See a stranger
Someone i don't reconize
Try to smile
Try to be happy
But too much pain
Barley any words
To describe
How much i hurt
Too much pain to bear would make you go extra miles to catch for the remedy.Good writes Desse.
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4/26/2024 12:35:31 AM # 1.0.0.1119
I really like the brevity in each line. It makes the poem flow well. And I know how when you're (not you specifically just in general) really depressed, you tend to write more briefly, so it really adds to the mood. I hope you're doing alright, that sounds really sad, though I can relate to how you feel. Keep writing your feelings.