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I really like the brevity in each line. It makes the poem flow well. And I know how when you're (not you specifically just in general) really depressed, you tend to write more briefly, so it really adds to the mood. I hope you're doing alright, that sounds really sad, though I can relate to how you feel. Keep writing your feelings.

Too much pain to bear would make you go extra miles to catch for the remedy.Good writes Desse.