Too Much Humility (1) Poem by Azure Critic

Too Much Humility (1)

Rating: 4.5


Sometimes I wish to have a friend who would love me as much as I love you.
Sometimes I wish to have a friend who is just like me.
In my goodness, I believe.

But sometimes I really wonder,
Would your life be better if the one who loves you were not me?

You should spend time looking for some better others
The best in the world, you deserve.
I'm afraid that I'm not the best.
I'm afraid that I'm not the best.

You deserve the best in the world.
It would be so sad if that's not me.
I would cry, but I know,
I need you to have the best in the world.

It's so hard, I am trying to be the best in the world.
It's so hard, and now I am crying so hard.

Sometimes I wish to have a friend who would love me as much as I love you.
Sometimes I wish to have a friend who is just like me.
In my goodness, I believe.

But sometimes I really wonder,
Would your life be better if the one who loves you were not me?

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Yassar Ali 09 April 2009

True friendship beautifully painted in this great piece

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