Friday, September 9, 2011

Too Raw To Eat Comments

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Picked over like a piece of meat
Nibbled and a little bit uneasy
Difficult it is to please
Somebody who prefers
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Lawrence S. Pertillar
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Stefanie Fontker 09 September 2011

Very beautiful and passionate. This is quite melancholy, I like the emotions this invokes. Very well written.

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Lawrence S. Pertillar

Lawrence S. Pertillar

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