Too Weak Poem by Nathalie Petersson

Too Weak



So weak, too weak.
Lost in the deepest(?) .
Would you find the light?
Find the right hand?
Who wants to show you the right way out?
Out of this f*cking hell.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Blue Eyes 15 August 2008

very nice but u have one spelling mistake..''who wants'' i hope as u read my poems that u try to telll me about the mistakes u spot.

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