Torn Apart Poem by Belle elleb

Torn Apart

Rating: 4.0


does it make you feel any better,
that i'm lieing on the floor crying my eyes out and you're just watching?
is it weakness in your eyes?
does it make you smile when you see me suffering so much?
do you think it's funny,
the way my boddies being torn apart limb by limb?
how my hearts being ripped up into a million peices?
would you like so see me jump off a bridge,
into my watery grave?
oh how i wish you could see me right now,
i wish you could stand before me
and watch me jump
i'd tell you so much
so much that would make you regret what you said
but no it won't work
becasue no amount of suffering i give u
will make up for the years you've given me

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Greenwolfe 1962 15 July 2008

I recommend this, because it is a slightly new take for me on the suffering in love and over it. GW62

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Brian Mills 10 December 2007

only one word.......wow! Brian~

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