Friday, September 12, 2008

Tornado Devastation Comments

Rating: 5.0

It came spiraling down from above
This twisting darkened thing
We looked to the sky in horror
What damage would this one bring?
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Marilyn Lott
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Ryan Thompson 12 September 2008

this is a wonderful poem, did you have to go though this, if you did im sorry....you masterfully portayed a picture in my mind. -ryan

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Kesav Easwaran 12 September 2008

learn to take life in its stride...good message, Marilyn...brought out well in beautiful verse...10

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Marilyn Lott

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Washington state USA
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