Touch The Heart Poem by Amrit Rathi

Touch The Heart

Rating: 4.4


If you touch the heart
of a person,
of your work,
of an experience,
of an action,
you wish it to become the best,
and you’ll strive for it sure,
not as a matter of just feelings,
but merging yourself with it,
embracing it,
becoming completely lost within it,
until the Means look like the End.

And what do you strike?
It’s gold!
It’s beauty!
It’s glory!
It’s wonder!
It’s climax!
It’s pleasure!
That’s what comes out
without a thought or expectation,
in the flow, with the least effort,

This is Love,
or a mindful meditation-
all embracing, beyond the self-
a gentle step for Human Evolution!

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COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Soraka Starchild 04 May 2010

this is really good!

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Dr Antony Theodore 05 May 2010

It’s like gold! It’s beautiful! It’s glorious! It’s wonderful! It’s Climax! It’s pleasant! That comes out. And it’s Without a thought, or expectations, In flow, through the least effort, This is Love, All embracing, beyond self A gentle step To Human Evolution. i like these lines very much... very nice ideas.. thank u for sharing. invite u to read my poems and send ur comments

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Mukul Chaudhari 05 May 2010

Yes, the journey is the destination! Very nice expression of love - the real meaning of love I think. Wonderful.

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All encompassing love, truly from the heart. Love is so powerful. Enjoyed the read. Love: D

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This is Love, /All embracing, beyond self, /A gentle step to Human Evolution.’ Vedic thought of renunciation … [beyond self] …zero expectation…but zillion participation… Very nicely conceived and poemed Sir… 10+ Ms. Nivedita UK

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Anjali Sinha 16 May 2010

wowwwwwww really true love is It’s like gold! It’s beautiful! It’s glorious! It’s wonderful! It’s Climax! It’s pleasant! I like your poems they are great! ! ! ! ! a 10++

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Valery Atkinson 08 May 2010

When we give anything our 100% we really get what you say [And what do you strike? It’s like gold! It’s beautiful! It’s glorious! It’s wonderful! It’s Climax! ] Again a great insight! Your Every poem has a message.

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Nerisha Kemraj 06 May 2010

a great poem :) simple yet profound

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