* Touching Poem by aryaindia india

* Touching

Rating: 5.0


to the ray of love that runs through our lives

I feel you in the squeeze within my heart
Of me you are so much so much a part
I gaze at you in wonder, bits and starts
As lovingly you send your wondrous dart

So far, so far away you seem
But then I know you're close within my dream
The days they dawn as smiling I do beam
Enclosed within so much a part my stream

In tears and veins my sorrow runs it seems
In depth beyond the real within my realms
While rhythm in the sense of what it teams
Believe do I you're there no more just dreams

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Kesav Easwaran 16 December 2009

heartfelt write...your lines hold your heart...the words rhyme deep into the reader heart...mine for one...believe wonderful composition Arya...thanks...10

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Marieta Maglas 11 December 2009

nice lyric poem, lovely rhymes 10

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Born2 Shine 11 December 2009

This is very special, I was carried very specially through your world.

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