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Towards Jaisalmer...

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Life exists in a variety of forms,
Nature nurtures it as per its norms;
Imagine life in the absence of water,
Without green leaves and spring shower.

Life exists in a lifeless form,
with barren land, plenty of thorn;
As far as vision can penetrate,
Trees are rare and spikes saturate.

Sand dunes rising high and falling low,
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Anand Madhukar 16 September 2009

A good write though the stark landscape perhaps has the potential to be depicted even better.

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Mahendra Choudhary 16 August 2009

its very nicely composed, and a poet from delhi can imagine the life of jaisalmer (i belongs to this region.) in this manner its amazing, fabulous and fantastic. I like the composition. You create a real picture of jaisalmer in readers mind. its heart rending poem.

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