Life exists in a variety of forms,
Nature nurtures it as per its norms;
Imagine life in the absence of water,
Without green leaves and spring shower.
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its very nicely composed, and a poet from delhi can imagine the life of jaisalmer (i belongs to this region.) in this manner its amazing, fabulous and fantastic. I like the composition. You create a real picture of jaisalmer in readers mind. its heart rending poem.
A good write though the stark landscape perhaps has the potential to be depicted even better.