Trade--Inspired By Richard Wlodarski's Captain Bad News Poem by M.J. Lemon

Trade--Inspired By Richard Wlodarski's Captain Bad News

Rating: 5.0

welcome to the border between
life and what comes then
a one-way journey made after choices
thought, deliberation, banter
nudged in the direction of the trade
that cost twenty years' breath after a month
of agony from the dust inhaled

Sitting still in the soil of ancestors
promised life for many years yet
taking freedom free will and opportunity
in the form of tax, tariff
giving poverty, pain, and insecurity

a few decades traded for a life
giving soil for the dust

Tuesday, December 30, 2025
Topic(s) of this poem: giving,poverty
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
This very mangled sonnet is inspired by Richard Wlodarski's brilliant poem that deals with the emotions and impacts of significant choices and trades. While my subject matter is very different, the idea for this poem was stirred by Captain Bad News.
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Richard Wlodarski 04 February 2026

M.J., it's always a pleasure, and honour, to inspire other poets and to be inspired by them!

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Richard Wlodarski 07 January 2026

3) cont'd: At the pace that he's going at, he will singlehandedly destroy the economies of both Canada and the US. Americans should TRADE him for a politically savvy democratic president. That rules out Vance and most Republicans!

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Richard Wlodarski 07 January 2026

3) I find that what Trump is doing to be thoroughly disgusting and nonsensical. For an allegedly successful businessman, he seems to have lost touch with the dire needs of the economy. He is using microeconomics instead of macroeconomics.

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Richard Wlodarski 01 January 2026

2) M.J., I will soon be revisiting this gem and commenting a little more. Thanks for this ingenious write, Captain Good News!

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Richard Wlodarski 01 January 2026

Talk about BRILLIANT! I'm nowhere close to you, M.J.! But I do like the quarterback/receiver roles that we both seem to seemingly effortlessly relish in. Very happy that my poem inspired you to write this gem.

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M.J. Lemon 06 January 2026

Thank you so much, Richard. I very appreciate this comment and your brilliance. After I read 'Captain...' I found a light bulb going on. This poem in this form could not exist without Captain Bad News. Many thanks!

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