Trails Of Thoughts Poem by john tiong chunghoo

Trails Of Thoughts



my words
that hit
the page

they pass
the trail
of your
thoughts
before
marching
to the
lines

forgive me
if they have
walked the
same way

forgive me
if they
have been
prosaic

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Raynette Eitel 22 March 2007

I like this one, John. The short lines really do march along nicely and the essence of the poem is so true. Raynette

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john tiong chunghoo

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Sibu, Sarawak, Borneo East Malaysia
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