Wednesday, January 25, 2012

Train Comments

Rating: 5.0

There’s a train that leads to miles away,
It’s a special train, It leaves today.
You’ve looked it up and booked it
Bought your seat,
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Peggy Pollock
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Sara Tehrani 25 January 2012

A fun catchy poem depicting an interesting original meaning into investing our time into something. One i feel most of us can relate to, as who hasnt missed their train before? Thanks for sharing

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Sara Tehrani 25 January 2012

Such a fun catchy and clever poem. I like how deep you have expressed the meanings of investing your time into something. Full of character and one I think many of us can relate to as who hasnt missed their train before? :)

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Dave Walker 25 January 2012

Great poem, really like it. A great write. May i invite you to read my new poem called, An Angel Cries.

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Anthony Goodall 25 January 2012

Very well written with a nice message.

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